Deeper…Still (Spoken Word Poetry)

Hi everyone!

Tara, one of our fellow poets, asked me if she could record this poem.  What an honor!  It’s very special to me when a reader sees such a value in my work.

So, I’ve provided Tara’s version, and my version.

Thank you Tara!

 

 

 

You feel it,
Don’t you?

The natural cooling,

The evaporative effect
Of sweat
Now glistening,
Leaving
Your skin…

A direct
And immutable result,
Of passion,
Physical connection…

And release.

Me,
Releasing you…

And you…

Me.

There is nothing
Like it,
In the human condition…

Yes?

But in this
Past passion moment,
As we fall back
To earth,
And reality,

I want you to know…

No…

I need you to accept
Another,
And more fundamental,
And important reality.

Our passion…

Our embrace…

Our,

Our sex…

Personify
Our perfect love.

But I beg you.

Don’t stop here,

Don’t stop now,

We can

And must

Go further,

To a deeper,

More important,

And satisfying place.

This is more
Than sex.

We need,

We need to go

To that final place
Of commitment,
And trust,
And overwhelming love.

We need to go

Deeper…

Still.

© 2018 W. C. Stacia, Jr.

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22 thoughts on “Deeper…Still (Spoken Word Poetry)

  1. Your poem is beautiful. I like how you formatted it to set the pace; slow the reader down. Make them savor each moment.

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    1. So appreciate your comments. Slow is good… yes?

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  2. I think that place is what people call intimacy? Beautiful, as ever.

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  3. Takes the reader on a vivid and deep journey…loved it….

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    1. So glad you liked it! Thank you very much for the wonderful comment!

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      1. I am liking every one of your creations…most welcome…

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      2. Wonderful! Thank you so much!

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      3. Most welcome…write on…

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  4. Ooohhh I love this! May I do an audio of this?

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    1. Absolutely!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

      What an honor that would be.

      PLEASE.

      You, Tara, are so kind.

      Record, post as you so please.

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      1. I will let you know when it’s done and give you the SoundCloud link and you can then do whatever you wish with it. It is my gift to you.

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      2. So many thanks my friend!! Enjoy!!!

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      3. Bill, do you want me to email you the recording to do with as you please? Or just link to SoundCloud when I get it up there?

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      4. Whatever is easiest for you! Look forward to it Tara!

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  5. Wonderfully felt & written, wonderfully read by both, very touching and describing deepest desire or trying to get closer & closer to …

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  6. Thanks for sharing, Bill. You’re wonderful.

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    1. The pleasure is all mine, my friend.

      😊

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  7. Absolutely gorgeous so beautifully done! Loved it!

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