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Our Treasures, Distilled (Spoken Word Poetry)

 

Filigree of gold,
Sensual, lush lacework,
Your body, your regalia,
Lavaliere of my love.

Molten, heat’s marking,
Softly melted, aureate gilding,
Spreading, liquid brilliance,
Your skin glistening for me.

Queen in my eyes,
Your supplicant, your servant,
Your whispers, my orders,
Consummation complete.

So take me, so wanting,
Hot murmurs, neck needing,
Jeweled kisses, soft breathing,
My moisture, endowed.

Goddess, my worship,
My gemstones, I offer,
To hold you, to love you,
Your fantasies to fill.

Your halcyon elegance,
My chiseled, diamond edges,
Raw desire, blazing passion,
Our treasures, distilled.

© 2019 W. C. Stacia, Jr.

Published by Bill

A former submarine Commanding Officer, I've followed several pursuits since retiring from the Navy, including the creation of my own IT services company. While that experience has been very rewarding, it still left me wanting to fulfill a more creative side of my life. WCS Poetry has been my first step down that path.

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81 thoughts on “Our Treasures, Distilled (Spoken Word Poetry)”

  1. blindzanygirl January 25, 2019 — 4:35 pm

    Wow! That’s hot, Bill. 😊

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      Bill January 25, 2019 — 4:46 pm

      Thanks Lorraine! You make me smile.

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      1. blindzanygirl January 25, 2019 — 5:09 pm

        Good. I got a bit hot too ! 😊

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        Bill January 25, 2019 — 5:12 pm

        Oh!!! Now I’m really smiling!!

        🙂

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      3. blindzanygirl January 25, 2019 — 5:20 pm

        Lol

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        Bill January 25, 2019 — 5:22 pm

        🙂 !!!!!!!!!!!!!

        You rock Lorraine!!!

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      5. blindzanygirl January 25, 2019 — 5:23 pm

        Lol. I’m just ready for a bit of rock and roll!

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        Bill January 25, 2019 — 5:24 pm

        YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

        🙂 !!!!!!!!!!!

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      7. blindzanygirl January 25, 2019 — 5:25 pm

        Maybe in the hay?

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        Bill January 25, 2019 — 5:26 pm

        Now…I’m blushing!!

        🙂

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      9. blindzanygirl January 25, 2019 — 5:27 pm

        Ha ha. I was raised on a farm lol

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        Bill January 25, 2019 — 5:28 pm

        You are so fantastic! Love the wit and edginess.

        Thank you Lorraine!!

        🙂

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      11. blindzanygirl January 25, 2019 — 5:30 pm

        There’s a lot of hay around on a farm. The hay gets everywhere. Into parts that you didn’t know you had!

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        Bill January 25, 2019 — 7:12 pm

        You absolutely slay me Lorraine…so many SMILES!!!

        YOU ABSOLUTELY ROCK!!!

        🙂 !!!

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      13. blindzanygirl January 26, 2019 — 3:56 am

        Lol it’s nice to have a bit of lighthearted fun isn’t it! Havea good day. I have just woken up from my night’s sleep. X

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        Bill January 26, 2019 — 5:42 am

        It is fun. Thank you Lorraine. Have a great day!

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      15. blindzanygirl January 26, 2019 — 9:56 am

        You too Bill. See you tonight maybe lol

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      17. blindzanygirl January 26, 2019 — 10:05 am

        Lol

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  2. blindzanygirl January 25, 2019 — 4:36 pm

    What on earth is that emoticon that I clickedm on? sorry. Twas meant to be a smile!

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      Bill January 25, 2019 — 4:47 pm

      You got it exactly right!! Thank you!!

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  3. deyspublishing January 25, 2019 — 4:56 pm

    Brilliant! Such passion in every word!

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      Bill January 25, 2019 — 4:57 pm

      Thank you Dorothy!!!! Hope you have a wonderful Friday evening!

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      1. deyspublishing January 25, 2019 — 5:00 pm

        You’re welcome Bill. So do I.
        Enjoy your Friday evening.

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        Bill January 25, 2019 — 5:13 pm

        Thank you my friend. 🙂

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      3. deyspublishing January 25, 2019 — 5:13 pm

        You’re welcome my friend.

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  4. tara caribou January 25, 2019 — 5:01 pm

    Oh my gosh. You …. made an entire poem using only luscious sexy words. My goodness this is… yeah… whew! …. it’s feeling rather warm in here, isn’t it??!

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      Bill January 25, 2019 — 5:15 pm

      You’re killin’ me!! 🙂 !!!!!!!!!

      And yes…it is a little warm here!

      🙂

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  5. Gina January 25, 2019 — 5:02 pm

    sultry and sharp, like how the rough edges invites softness, well from my reading, excellent piece Bill.

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      Bill January 25, 2019 — 7:09 pm

      Thank you so much Johndca!! Very kind of you!!

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  7. Jamie Whorton January 25, 2019 — 7:11 pm

    Excellent!! Great writing!

    😊

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      Bill January 25, 2019 — 7:13 pm

      Thank you Jamie. That means a lot to me.

      So glad that you liked it!

      🙂

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      1. Jamie Whorton January 25, 2019 — 7:16 pm

        My pleasure!! I thought it was great ! 😊

        Hope you’re having a nice Friday evening!!!

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        Bill January 25, 2019 — 7:20 pm

        So many thanks!

        I wish for you a wonderful and warm Friday evening as well.

        🙂

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      Bill January 25, 2019 — 8:11 pm

      So many thanks.

      That means so much coming from an artist with consummate smithing skills. You know how to shape and bend the words.

      Love it.

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      1. erroneouschoices January 25, 2019 — 8:13 pm

        Consummate smithing Lol 🤗

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      Bill February 10, 2019 — 8:40 pm

      So glad you liked it Dorothy! Thank you!

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      1. deyspublishing February 10, 2019 — 8:42 pm

        It was great. Really.
        You’re welcome.

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      Bill February 10, 2019 — 8:41 pm

      Thank you Mamen!!!!

      I really appreciate that!!!!

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    2. MOMENTS February 11, 2019 — 5:20 am

      Thank God I am not the only one telling you this, Bill. Your voice is just marvelous and musical per se. In addition, you know exactly how to use the right tone, pitch and pauses when necessary. In doing so, you let the listener linger in the musicality and sensuality of your verses. 👏

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        Bill February 11, 2019 — 8:25 am

        Really appreciate it Mamen!

        😊

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        Bill February 11, 2019 — 8:24 am

        That is so very kind of you Marta!! Thank you!! I’m trying to practice as I intend to include spoken word poetry in my ebook. I really enjoy reading, and I’m glad you enjoyed it! Have a wonderful day!

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      4. MOMENTS February 11, 2019 — 8:33 am

        You too, Bill. Please, let me know when your e-book is ready. I will definitely buy it as I told you. The fact is I never tire of your poetry and your topics about unrequited love, sexual desire, the longing to love and be loved, the fleeting moments of love’s highs and the desperate lows when it goes away and leaves you in a state of loneliness, the blurring of dream and reality, the opposite yet complementary issues of illusion and delusion… Wow, you always have that much to say… What about sexual desire and longing for true love with people whose ages are very different? This is again my friend Mario Savioni writing about this. I highly recommend you his last post. As you already know, he is a great friend of mine, Without him I would never have started my blog and come across you and some other talented writers. I do appreciate your following my blog, but I would be immensely happy, a lot happier (and Mario too), if you could check out his last post. He is a far better writer than myself; instead, he gets too little attention. Chapter 5 works as a totally independent unit that can be read and fully comprehended without having to read the previous chapters. Link: https://savioni.wordpress.com/2019/02/07/pickles-and-tarts-chapter-5/

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        Bill February 11, 2019 — 12:32 pm

        Thank you you Marta! Just looked at it and it was very good indeed. And, I love your work as well. So rich and filled with wonderful imagery.

        I am very happy we crossed paths!

        Have a nice evening!

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      6. MOMENTS February 11, 2019 — 12:46 pm

        You are welcome, and thank you so much for checking out Mario’s writing too. As you know, it means a lot to me. You too have a nice evening, my friend!

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      Bill February 10, 2019 — 8:41 pm

      You make me smile Gina. So many thanks! I hope you have a wonderful Monday!!

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      1. Gina February 10, 2019 — 8:59 pm

        happy smiles all around then! yes its a nice Monday, beautiful warm sun. have a restful sunday Bill

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  12. Jamie Whorton February 10, 2019 — 5:25 pm

    Love it!!! Very nicely done !!

    😊😊

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      Bill February 10, 2019 — 8:42 pm

      Thank you Jamie!!! Means a lot!!!

      🙂 🙂

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      1. Jamie Whorton February 10, 2019 — 8:57 pm

        It’s my pleasure!!!!!

        😊😊

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  13. Tanya February 10, 2019 — 6:29 pm

    It’s pretty sensuous and scintillating, more so because it is recited passionately, with perfection intonation and diction. It’s a kind of poem a reader will like to hear to in late evening with few drinks and be lost in the words and your voice.

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      Bill February 10, 2019 — 8:44 pm

      Tanya, you are so kind. That’s a wonderful visual. Exactly the picture I had in my mind.

      How did you know?

      🙂

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  14. Tanya February 10, 2019 — 8:50 pm

    May be it’s the love of evening drinks between us or is the plain simple love 🤔

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    Bill February 10, 2019 — 8:52 pm

    Oh….Tanya. You know how to make me smile. Yes, you do.

    Sigh…

    🙂

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  16. Tanya February 10, 2019 — 8:55 pm

    Smile is longer than a mile, but I feel sensuous poetry is better served in evening with 🥃 drink, such an escape from the dreariness

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      Bill February 10, 2019 — 9:09 pm

      Precisely…. such a glorious image.

      What a rich and warming thought.

      Thank you Tanya!!!

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      1. Tanya February 10, 2019 — 9:11 pm

        Pleasure is all mine monsieur! Merci! 🙏

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  17. michnavs February 11, 2019 — 3:06 am

    Oh its really beautiful Bill..

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      Bill February 11, 2019 — 5:14 am

      Thank you Mich!! Very kind of you!!

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  18. drowsies February 11, 2019 — 3:11 pm

    Oh my gosh! What powerful words. Following for sure… if you could check out my blog I would be eternally grateful 🙂

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      Bill February 11, 2019 — 8:35 pm

      Thank you! And I will! The pleasure is mine!

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  19. enchirist February 12, 2019 — 8:13 am

    Brings the poem to life. You have lovely voice.

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      Bill February 12, 2019 — 10:30 am

      So many thanks!!

      Glad you enjoyed it!

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      1. enchirist February 12, 2019 — 11:41 am

        Very welcome! ☺️

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  20. Elizabeth Anne Ives February 22, 2019 — 5:28 pm

    I am entranced! Your voice cast a spell on my heart!

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      Bill February 22, 2019 — 6:22 pm

      So very kind of you!! Thank you!!

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