So Susceptible


Utter urgency,
Burning desire to touch,
To feel,
To taste…

Seemingly simple,
But so much more complex,

Passion’s mystery,

Your whispers,
My whispers,
Elegantly entwined,
Love’s novel resulting,
Publishing awaits…

Begging to be read.

Deep depth of need,
More than pure heat,
Beyond culmination,
Foundation of forever,

Mutual dreams
Of rich rapture,

All these thoughts,
My thoughts…

So surely,
You sense
My desire,
To please.

My quest
To hold…

My pledge
To love…

Just one,



Each word
From your lips.

Each feathered caress,

Bare skin
On bare skin,

Exposes me more,

So joyously weak,

So aching for us…

Undeniably susceptible,


To you.

© 2018 W. C. Stacia, Jr.

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22 thoughts on “So Susceptible

  1. Love this!! You’re doing an amazing job with your new voice/style !!


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    1. Thank you Jamie!!! I really appreciate that!!

      😊 !

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      1. My pleasure!!

        You are on to something!! 😊

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  2. the mysteries of passion are intricate yet so simple, something bare skin conveys better than words, but we thirst for words, and you quench that thirst. A beautiful pairing of senses Bill, touch and desire, words and caresses. a sweet read on a lovely morning.

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    1. So glad you enjoyed it Gina….and thank you for your lovely comment!

      That made for a very sweet read on this Friday night! 🙂 !


      1. Sweetness creates much joy.

        Hope your Friday is excellent and prepares you for a good weekend

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      2. Thank you so much…enjoy your weekend as well!

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    1. Thank you Brandi! I hope you have a wonderful Friday evening!

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      1. You’re very welcome, Bill! And thank you! I hope you have an amazing Friday night!

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  3. Good lord this is sexy and sweet and whew! I love it! Intelligence is sexy. So is reading and writing. Soooo yeahhhh…. I really like this.

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    1. Thank you Tara!

      And, I hope the earthquake didn’t affect you!

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      1. I posted an update on my blog but it was a big shaker but I am fine. Thank you.

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  4. I love the voice you used here..

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    1. Thank you so much! I’m glad you enjoyed it!


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